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16 Aug 2009, 10:08

Those are my latests artworks for now , the girls are paint on phtoshop, and the last one is on painter XI.
Comments and advices are welcome as usual :))
Have a nice day buddies

**New updates**17 September 2009

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akil x 17 Aug 2009, 01:55 #

ellow bro.....

nice work!!! natures best & wonder.....you've interpreted it & can see with in your work the heart, soul & passion of an artist love in nature.... your work is almost excellent!....elements of design are almost applied.....it has depth, texture, contrast,
etc......keep it up......more power & learn from mother nature.....thankx...

akil x

akil x 18 Aug 2009, 02:38 #

ellow bro,

he he he a sudden change of genre eh!!!!.....nice and seductive....think im in love
w/your drawings..he he he...where did you create that?? what kind of software or progz?
keep it up.......always!

akil X

JM-DG 18 Aug 2009, 05:48 #

@ akil_x Photoshop is used and last one is made on painter XI

As the author mentionned...

@ predator2104
Some critics.
Good- The nature portrait is perfect.^^
Bad- Your girls have too much man character.
The reason is that you define too much the girl's muscles.
The body shapes of the girls aren't slim enough. too massive.

Here's a more girlish picture for you to understand what I mean:
(made by me of course ^^)

tobyb121 18 Aug 2009, 09:18 #

Great work, I think the waterfall is my favourite, it's just a great image

I have to agree with JMDG, in that the girls look a bit manly, partly due to the almost metallic look of the image, but I would not change this, it gives your image a real character that you don't see anywhere else,
keep up the good work,
tobyb

predator2104 18 Aug 2009, 15:27 #

@ akil x
Thank you for the nice words

appreciate that:). And no the change wasn't sudden it's just that I've uploaded the drawings to photoserver then don't know how they disappeared and only the waterfall stayed online.
yes right, the girls on photoshop and the painting on corel painter XI. For the girls I started with a hand drawing line art, then got clean lines with illustrator, and finally colored everything with photoshop.

@ JM-DG
Thank you for the comment:)
The perception of beauty is subjective

but I agree with you! The girls have something from men.And I've worked that meaningly, I'll try to explain: After watching a lot of girls and videos, I've noticed that there's 2 kind of pretty girls; the ones who are pretty and that's all, and the ones who are pretty and they have some charme (it's a french word sorry, can't find it in english). So I prefer the second category, and guess what, girls with charm have...let's say 5% of a man and 95% of a girl:) my best example is Aishwarya Rai. And that strong not thin girly shape, it's my own style

A comics character with more body:) you can check the comis girls and you'll see muscle too :D

@tobyb121
Thank you, yes that's what I'm trying to do, to give my comics illustration my own personality and character, my own style I should say:) lol I don't think that last girl in red can be a guy

or I'll sure be a gay in that case:p

JM-DG 07 Sep 2009, 18:18 #

New works!!!
Keep them coming I love them.
The last one is very girly love it ^^...

and the ones who are pretty and they have some charme (it's a french word sorry, can't find it in english)

About charme in french, in english it's charm...

predator2104 17 Sep 2009, 12:31 #

Thanks a lot! I've just added a new one

finished it 2 days ago.

tobyb121 19 Sep 2009, 12:22 #

I like this latest one, it's really nice, I know from experience that it can be very hard to create depth from this angle, but I think you've captured it very well, I was going to say that the guy at the front's right leg, looks more like a stub than bent, but then I realized my screen was at an awkward angle so the contrast was all wrong, you've actually got it just right, odd what a difference a bit of contrast makes ^_^

tobyb

akil x 19 Sep 2009, 13:48 #

good work bro,
another men i uniform genre....maybe a hung up from a computer games he he he....by the way why the front figure has a water mark? is it intentional? keep it up...try to post your work in our section the asta gfx thread, so that will be in constant place & communication....

predator2104 21 Sep 2009, 12:27 #

Thanks for your comments guys

good or bad they are allllllllll welcome for me.
@tobyb121
Yes right, that's my big issue when I start a painting: lightning contrast and shadows...all monitors aren't the same so I have to find the average render. For the big print sizes I just embed the color format so it shows correctly on any screen. But here it's just for display purposes.

@ Akil
The last one is watermarked just because i copied the link from Deviantart

I've upload it there, then I wanted to share it on asta. So I just copied the link. Yes I'm a big fan of PC games, wanted to enter Ubisoft campus this year but they said nooo you're not from this country! (it was Ubisoft Morocco) Anyway, am continuing my job as an illustrator and concept artist. Maybe one day I'll participate in the development of game.