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Nearly midnight, made this to keep me awake, what do you think?


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OMG.. I love it. Very Happy I want to go on your Punk religion!!

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propaganda!

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another punk kid?? Green_Colorz_PDT_39 Don't want to see lol joking.
nice work hybrid!
clouds look somewhat awkward to me though Rolling eyes it must be by the default cloud rendering in filters right?
nice work Smile

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Great work .:hybrid:.
Can you post a collection of these fonts, as well as other ones.

Excellent job though.

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The background is plain...only cloud...and to empty.
No focal point,color and depth.
Bad choosing of font.
The lighting was bad either...
Try to improve it,hybrid. Smile

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all valid points, and it does look really empty now that I look at it a day later, will try and improve it, thanks for the comments.

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Dropped it into my CS3. I hope you wont mind the honest critics:

1. The hair spikes (red extensions) are way too unnatural looking. More depth. See the drop shadow u used on the spikes against the smoke in the bg, well, it worsens the lack of realism. Suggest a nice gentle oute glow with no softening though. (I wish I knew how to post an image her so i could retouch 4 u bud)
2. The word RELIGION (nice effect) but too flat
3. The words AS YOUR....font doesnt belong in here
4. Nice touch on filter use on the hand flame but you should have increased tge flame height and added a little less movement.
5. Smoke in the bg is looking a little flat. Did u use difference clouds. U shouldnt have. Draw the clouds bro. Its not that hard.

A suggestion. If u know your animation...drop your image into Autodesk and give the bg some movement.

Damn how I wish I knew how to post pics here haha

Anyway great effort.

Keep it up

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Hey hey, remember this was made at midnight Toothy

Nah kiddin, thanks for the comments.

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No problem bud... Its good...Just needs tweaking

Maybe u can tell me how to post my stuff here

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Yeah great comments.

And btw, here's how to post images:
[img]IMAGE LINK[/img]

Just change the "IMAGE LINK" to the link of the image you want to post.

Here is your signature:

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Thanx bud. I keep trying it but instead of seeing the image I see the link text. Thats hoe u saw my sig. Was the link not the iamge lol. Dont know whats wrong

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Got it....but oops its cut off...oh man oh man

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hybrid will give you the link now.

It is resized.

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Thanks guys. I really appreciate the time u took to help.

If there is anything I can help with someday please just find me here.

Ciao

Once again thanks Hybrid & Cysto

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